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A shadow Extinguished by midhun-kumar

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I like it xD I love how in the shadow the hand is holding the cigarette, like it's a shadow of reality, in the past. It's very good at representing your idea of 'quitting smoking'. The sketching of the hand is very good, though I think there should be a more play on the shading on the hand as well to create more form, though it is very good in itself. Also when shading from the darkest point of the shadows, to the lightest, you can try to blend the shadows more, from darkest to lightest, to create a smooth variation in shade. I hope I made that clear, I'm not good at explaining xD. Overall it is very good, it really makes me think.
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midhun-kumar Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you. I did less blending, cus i was trying to make it look like a spot light was hitting the hand. that's y one part pf the shadow is darker than the other edge, thats where it was spose to be closer to the surface...
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TheAleksDemon Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Srry, it's my first critique -___- i still gotta get used to it
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midhun-kumar Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
mine too, mine too...
i've had an id for a while,
but just uploaded all my stuff 2hrs ago..
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TheAleksDemon Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh okay, :) that explains it. It was amazing though, I still can't draw like that xD
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